Looks like you have some intriguing images here, and the overarching narrative structure is solid.
Obviously, you’ll be adding sound, but what kind were you thinking? You might think about a voiceover that states your argument and builds your analysis. This will link the images together.
I also recommend making the font consistent throughout, or at least consistent within a single type of text. For example, each of the slides saying “Psycho”, “Bound”, “Criminal woman shows…”, and “Woman’s innate vanity…” contain different fonts, which is confusing. I recommend making this visually consistent. Also, cursive is very hard to read on screen. You might want to choose a font that is easier to read.
How were you thinking of tying it all together at the end?
Keep going, you’ve got a solid start here.
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